Second Edit – Finished

This afternoon I have completed a full second edit. I’m happy with this accomplishment….finishing the day before my 59th birthday.

I still have some work to do though. I have a character named Charnel who is begging to be in the book. She only has one chapter and a few mentions so far.

I feel I can layer her in without disturbing what’s already written because Charnel is oblivious to what’s happening in the world around her.

She does however add some important elements in her life that help define the state of technology at the time of this story.

Let’s see what becomes of Charnel.